類型：學習方法
時間：2022-12-30
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一、以下四種手段是增加句子復雜性的常見方法，也是得高分的“亮點”。
1.改變句子的開頭方式，不要一味地都是主語開頭，接著是謂語、賓語，最后再加一個狀語。可以把狀語置于句首，或用分詞做狀語等。?
［原文］we met at the
school gate and went
there together early in the
morning.
［修正］early in the morning we met at the school gate and went there together.
［原文］the
young man couldn't help
crying when he
heard the bad news.?
［修正］
hearing the bad news，the young man couldn't help crying.?
2.在整篇文章中，避免只使用一兩個句式，要靈活運用諸如倒裝句、強調句、主從復合句、分詞狀語等。
①強調句?
［原文］my
parents praised ah fu
warmly. it had
saved my
little sister bravely.
［修正］my parents praised ah fu warmly. it was our
brave ah fu who had saved my little sister bravely.?
②由what等引導的從句，此處的what相當于中文的“所……”，有很大的概括力，如：?
［原文］we had to
stand there to
catch the
offender.?
［修正］what we had to do was (to) stand there，
trying to catch the offender.?
what
china has
achieved in
recent years is
known through the
world.
china is no
longer what it used to be.?
③由with或without引導的短語。如：?
he sat in a
chair with a
newspaper in the hand.?
④分詞短語。如：?
satisfied with the
result， he
decided to go on with a new
experiment.?
⑤倒裝句。如：?
only in this way can we
achieve our goal.?
never before have i seen such a
wonderful film.?
⑥省略句。如：?
if so，
victory will be ours.
you can make some
changes wherever necessary.?
⑦對比，這是中文中也常用的方法。如：?
failure is not a
crime， but failure to
learn from failure is.?
when i play， i feel
excited， and
after it i feel
relaxed.?
3.通過分句和合句，增強句子的連貫性和表現力。?
［原文］he
stopped us half an hour ago. he made us catch the next offender.?
［修正］he stopped us half an hour ago and made us catch the next offender.?
［原文］we had a
short rest. then we
began to play
happily. we sang and
danced.?
some told
stories. some
played chess.?
［修正］after a short rest， we had
great fun
singing and
dancing，
telling jokes and
playing chess.?
4.學會使用過渡詞。如：?
①遞進： then(然后)，
besides(還有)，
furthermore(而且)，
moreover(此外)等。?
②轉折：
however(然而)， but(但是)， on the
country(相反)， after all(畢竟)等。?
③總結：
finally(最后)， at last(最后)， in
brief(總之)， in
conclusion(最后)等。?
④強調：
indeed(確實)，
certainly(一定)，
surely(確定)，
above all(尤其)等。?
⑤對比： in the same way(同樣地)， just as(正如)， on the one hand…on the
other hand(一方面……另一方面……)等。?
5.注意使用不同長度的句子。?
二、對于“較復雜的詞匯”，可以從以下幾個方面著手。?
1.注意使用詞組、習語來代替一些單詞，以增加文采。如：?
［原文］a new
railway is
being built in my
hometown.?
［修正］a new railway is
under construction in my hometown.?
2.使用一些很有“洋味”的單詞。如：?
thank you for
sharing the time with us.?
the way he
views the world is very
practical.?
3.避免重復使用某一單詞或短語。如：?
［原文］i like
reading while my
brother likes watching television.
［修正］i like reading while my brother
enjoys watching television.
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